Friday 17 March 2017

My Special Place






My Special Place


4 Main Ideas

1. Flowers
2. Water
3. Trees
4. Birds

There I was, staring at a beautiful, shimmery, sparkly, glamorous shower of water drizzling all over my body. As I gazed up I saw and felt drops of water dripping into my eyes. I quickly rubbed my eyes to get the water out.


I heard: the birds chirping and singing sweetly, from the top of their lungs.

I smelt: the beautiful roses among the many trees greeting me with a friendly wave.

I felt: the heavenly breeze waving my hair around, like someone was playing with it.

I saw: a stunning eye popping view of the water drizzling down on the top of my head, like in the shower.

My Special Place is somewhere that I love to go and calms me whenever I’m frustrated, furious, flustered or really angry. It is so peaceful all you can hear is the birds chirping and singing together in tune.The water drizzling down like a gentle splash in the pool filled with multi colored fish zooming from here to there. When you put your head under it feels like someone is giving you a nice gentle massage, but wet. The water was glistening in the sun. It was as clear as a crystal, and as beautiful as a butterfly.

Can you guess where My Special Place is???

Reflection

What went well
What I could do better
  • What went well for me was that I used resources to help me e.g Thesaurus, Spell Write’s, Adjectives.

        I think I put a good amount
        of adjectives in and I used
        lots of punctuation e.g full
        stops, commas, question
        marks.
  • What I could better next time is try and add a little bit more sentences and add more detail.

        By adding more sentences I
        ment to try and fit more
        words into my sentence’s
        and fit more sentence’s
        into my paragraph’s.

By the way I have never actually been to this waterfall it was just made up. But to me it actually painted a clear picture in my head and felt and sounded like I was actually there.
I hope you enjoyed my special place, if you haven’t figured out where it is well heres the answer: it’s the WATERFALL
Written by: Riana Foster :) =) :)